Sunday, sunday, SUNDAY!

I spent Sunday just adding a few things and changing the ending from a happy one to a not so happy one.

Writing...

I took a few days off from writing but I'm back with it. Just adding stuff to the story.

Touched on a big point in the script.

Early on the doctors of Matthew told his mother to get in contact with his family because things didn't look good. But she never gave in to that suggestion. Just hoping and praying he'd pull through, which he eventually did.

At a snails pace

Editing and revising is going slow now because I want things to get as good as possible. It could be the never-ending task but what the hell?

Afternoon writing.

With a cup of coffee by my side I went about to develop character relationships and the tention that may come.

Coffee & Tunes

Adding more depth to the characters and their relationships tonight. Looking to be a pretty good story.

Tuesday revision

Although my writing is slower than the first draft I'm concentrating by adding bit and pieces to the story.

2nd draft continues

This process will go a lot slower because unlike when you're first writing the corrections or additions are far more sporatic.

Started the second draft

I'm still taking it easy. Not rushing or anything. But during my days off I had a few ideas to give the characters and writing a bit more depth.

Draft 1 complete

I wrote the final pages this afternoon on draft 1 of Retard. What a feeling.

A day or two more at most.

I'm on page 87 and nearing the end of the script. I figure I'll wrap it up soon.

Sunday

Hopefully it will be the last Sunday for the first draft. I'm on page 84 and I'll probably finish around 92-95 pages. I recall the first script I wrote. It never flowed as well as this one did. But then again that screenplay was all thought up unlike this one which is based on real life experiences.